Ponies

I really enjoy you style and wouldn't mind seeing more ponies, but the first pony's color scheme kind of hits you pretty hard. The hot pink doesn't really mesh well with the brown mane, nor does the rainbow fading to it. I suggest not having rainbow hair flow down in colors considering hair doesn't grow like that, but that's nothing too important. I suggest making the glimmer on her eyes white.

The grey pony is interestingly done. The hair critique applies here, but it isn't something to worry about. His/her feet are placed a little awkward. The tail's design is a little awkward, but I like it. Other wise it is fine.

The last pony!/ scheme seems a little dull. Since it's not a brighter yellow, the metal blue makes her seem faded. Though I didn't mind the eye coloring on any of the others, the top glimmer seems a little out of place. Her hair by her horn makes her seem like half of her head is shaved. It that's what you're going for, that fine. I like her stance and how you placed her. She seems the most balanced in that aspect. I enjoy her tail design the most as it's very interesting and it looks as if it is curving.

It's nothing really major that I see wrong. No major adjustments are really needed. Maybe a change in color on pony 1 and 3, making pony 1's coat a different color and maybe brightening a pony 3's main or coat. I don't think you need to do both on pony three.

Again, I do enjoy your style. It's still very MLP, but enough you that it doesn't look like you're directly copying the style. The uniqueness of the style makes me enjoy this work even more. I'm sure with practice you'll be extremely good at drawing ponies seeing as there wasn't a lot of issues in this piece. I'm not sure on you other angles and positions, but the side view seems pretty good. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>