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fursuit WIP #1

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so i need some tips on how i can improve it this is my second fursuit head my first one could be seen here if you guys have any tips on how i would improve this it would be great!

things im looking for:
- shape improvement
- furring tips
- help on doing the antlers using fleece
- anything else really
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I wanna say I really love the progress so far.


I'd say bulk the cheeks up and make the eyes bigger. Right now he has a bit of a canine face so i'd suggest making the bridge of the nose a bit more bulked up like a real rabbit.

Here's some image's i've found.

birdsbybaranoff.com/images/_7S…
petsbunch.com/wp-content/uploa…
pixdaus.com/files/items/pics/1…

See how they have downward slopes ?

Let me see if I can break the review down now.

Vison: 4.5

This head is nice so far and I can definitely see what your going for. I'd suggest fixing the bridge of the snout and the forehead to make it more rabbit like along with the nose area and chin.

I like the color scheme it looks very lovely.

Originality: 4

I honestly don't see that many jackalopes around if any so this is pretty neat.

Technique: 3.5

It's good so far but with the above changes and what other reviewers suggested it could be even better ! The nose looks nice and so do the horns. I also like the ears. They look very rabbity to me. It's a little hard to see the image properly but the colored parts you did of the head help give an idea of what it will look like when its done.


Impact: 4.5

Overall the impact this head has on me is good. I can't wait to see it finished. Might I suggest adding some teeth to it if you plan to do that ? Nothing big but just a little something. The mouth is really <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/e…" width="15" height="15" alt=":O" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="377" title=":O (Eek)"/> right now and seems empty with out that edition. A small pair of rabbit teeth would fit perfect in that spot.